Altrough you should try to add 'press' (maybe let the witness say something depending on what sentance you pressed him on),this is good. Altrough it's pretty fast too. Altrough I agree with LeLumberJack,the evidence descriptions were really thin,you could put the music when something important happens,like in that "guitar sound" scene (when you hear the sound in the lobby in the reccess). Altrough,it's pretty good. I look forward towards the next episode!
Thank you on the review too, and I will add press in the next episode, and sometimes pressing will finish the cross-exemination. The descepricions of the evidence would be bigger in the next episode, since I came up with an idea how to make bigger descepricions. Didn't you say you will be the writer in the next episode? Thanks on the review!
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